Post by rosesivine on Dec 28, 2005 19:24:15 GMT -5
1) A character history. It must be detailed.
Rose Sivine was born during a heavy drought in the summer. Her mother and father were worried because she was a frail kit on the verge of death. She was brought to the den of Yin and Yang, the most sacred place in all of the forest. The kit was blessed by the gods and lived, but with a condition. When Rose grew older, she would have to serve them for all of eternity. The parents agreed but Rose was to young to know what had happened. A year later on a gloomy day, Rose traveled with her parents to hunt for food. Thunder sounded and the two gods that had saved Rose's life came to take her to the heavens. Her parents refused, not wanting to lose their daughter. Unhappy, the gods took the two kitsunes up, where they would take Rose's place. She was left on Earth, sad and alone. In order to survive, the two gave her powers of good and evil. Yin, the good, gave her the power of healing. Yang, the evil, gave her the power of fire. Yin and Yang banished the kitsune to the one place that a power holding creature like herself would belong. The two said one word and vanished to the Heavens for all of eternity. That word was none other than, Dapplewood.
2) A character description
The young kitsune was wrapped in a fiery red glow from nose to tail. A golden sunlight was placed on her stomach, representing compassion and youth. Her long slender tails were each tipped with the yellow sunlight, each as bright as the next. The jet black paws emitted an Eerie smoke. Fiery red optics shifted in every direction, looking for predators. Auds perk back, ready to kill if attacked. The glossy fur was sleek and thin, made for swiftness. The sun-born kitsune hid in the brush, waiting for her next meal.
3) list of abilities/powers, special items, ect.
Rose never had powers until Yin and Yang bestowed a curse and a blessing upon her. She emits fire from her paws and her breath. It is a dangerous power that will consume her unless she can learns to master it. The kitsune also has the power of healing, a blessing that only a pure heart can truly master. She is new to the powers but can master them with both courage and determination.
4) A sample roleplay post. This is the most important part.
Rose wandered around the forest in deep curiosity. She saw a dead squirrel with a metal jaw around its fresh corpse. Her hunger was to strong to care about the metal machine and its odd features. The kitsune approached it, but heard a gunshot and took off. She was almost to a bush when she heard a snap and yelped. The metal jaw had caught her hind paw. Her paw began to bleed and she attempted to pulled it out. She saw a hunter appear and tried harder, yelping now and then from the agonizing pain. The kitsune heard a shot and felt a great pain in her fore paw. Rose finally yanked it out, making a bloody mess, and ran into the brush. She had escaped, but was severely wounded.
Rose Sivine was born during a heavy drought in the summer. Her mother and father were worried because she was a frail kit on the verge of death. She was brought to the den of Yin and Yang, the most sacred place in all of the forest. The kit was blessed by the gods and lived, but with a condition. When Rose grew older, she would have to serve them for all of eternity. The parents agreed but Rose was to young to know what had happened. A year later on a gloomy day, Rose traveled with her parents to hunt for food. Thunder sounded and the two gods that had saved Rose's life came to take her to the heavens. Her parents refused, not wanting to lose their daughter. Unhappy, the gods took the two kitsunes up, where they would take Rose's place. She was left on Earth, sad and alone. In order to survive, the two gave her powers of good and evil. Yin, the good, gave her the power of healing. Yang, the evil, gave her the power of fire. Yin and Yang banished the kitsune to the one place that a power holding creature like herself would belong. The two said one word and vanished to the Heavens for all of eternity. That word was none other than, Dapplewood.
2) A character description
The young kitsune was wrapped in a fiery red glow from nose to tail. A golden sunlight was placed on her stomach, representing compassion and youth. Her long slender tails were each tipped with the yellow sunlight, each as bright as the next. The jet black paws emitted an Eerie smoke. Fiery red optics shifted in every direction, looking for predators. Auds perk back, ready to kill if attacked. The glossy fur was sleek and thin, made for swiftness. The sun-born kitsune hid in the brush, waiting for her next meal.
3) list of abilities/powers, special items, ect.
Rose never had powers until Yin and Yang bestowed a curse and a blessing upon her. She emits fire from her paws and her breath. It is a dangerous power that will consume her unless she can learns to master it. The kitsune also has the power of healing, a blessing that only a pure heart can truly master. She is new to the powers but can master them with both courage and determination.
4) A sample roleplay post. This is the most important part.
Rose wandered around the forest in deep curiosity. She saw a dead squirrel with a metal jaw around its fresh corpse. Her hunger was to strong to care about the metal machine and its odd features. The kitsune approached it, but heard a gunshot and took off. She was almost to a bush when she heard a snap and yelped. The metal jaw had caught her hind paw. Her paw began to bleed and she attempted to pulled it out. She saw a hunter appear and tried harder, yelping now and then from the agonizing pain. The kitsune heard a shot and felt a great pain in her fore paw. Rose finally yanked it out, making a bloody mess, and ran into the brush. She had escaped, but was severely wounded.
Mostly minor errors that everyone (including me, sadly) makes and which will improve through further roleplay. I'd love to see you around the dream!