Post by cherrypelt on Nov 6, 2005 20:45:35 GMT -5
~ I am applying for Winter Avatar. I am the Flowerfur that Silver talked about and I am good friends with her.
1) ~ Cherry was born in early December; just when winter had just settled in. She was the second in a litter of four. She was always a very passive pup; therefore was the runt. As she grew, she remembered the sound of the wind howling outside the den; lulling her to sleep. As soon as she could walk, she wandered a little ways out of the den and stepped on the snow she had grown so accustomed to seeing. Cherry had always been a curious, yet smart wolf. She was the smartest, yet shyest of the litter; her brother and sisters dubbed her. She had chosen to leave her pack in search of a new life. This was a dangerous and risky thing to do; but she wanted to leave and get away from them. She wasn't sure why but lately she felt as if everything had seemed wrong. She decided to leave the pack. She told her brothers and sisters her choice; they accepted it; though they themselves were going to stay. Her parents, however, had not accepted this; and tried to forced her to stay. She rebelled against them and snuck out of camp one night while everyone was sleeping. She hasn’t seen her parents since then, and sometimes regrets her choice. She traveled for months on what would seem like an endless snowy forest. After a long time the snow melted and spring took over winter. During this time, Cherry found Dapplewood. It was a sight she welcomed after such a long period of solitude. She hopes to serve her new home well; for now she is an adult.
2) ~ Cherry has always had an odd colored pelt. She is a black and pink wolf. She has a light shade of magenta smoothly transitioning behind her ears. Her throat down to her stomach had a lighter shade of pink. Above her deep sapphire colored eyes is a crest of dark magenta fur. Her tail tip is covered in a light bliss pink. She always tries to keep her fur in top condition; it makes for a better impression on others. She has normal sized paws for her size; and is slimer than most. She is considered by others an overall pretty wolf; though she is too modest to admit that she agrees.
3) ~ Cherry’s powers grew slowly and she mastered them over time. She could feel stubs of wings growing from her shoulders. She learned that she could make a small area snow. She often walked away from the other wolves to make snow even in the heat of summer to play in. This took a considerable amount of energy. However, when she grew tired of the blistering sun and scorched ground of summer, she made snow to cool off in. Before, she could only make a trace amount appear where she was sitting. Now she can make a whole clearing have 3 inches of fresh, powdery snow. She found that she could also call up small winds. In summer when things were too hot, even in the shade, she made a breeze come to cool her off as she neared a nap.
4) ~ Cherrypelt padded along smiling to herself knowing that it was her favorite time of year again. The trees and ground were blanketed in snow; and she laughed as she sank down into the snow with a crunch. Even as she was watching the trees sway in the winter wind, it began to snow. She knew that she had best get back so she changed course, heading for the camp. She began the trek back and was jogging along briskly when she stopped short. She perked her ears; she had heard a twig snap. She strained her ears but could hear nothing more and slowly padded on; gradually getting more confident. As she neared camp, she suppressed a shiver as she looked back to see if she could spot the creature who had followed her. She saw nothing, but was still suspicious and unsatisfied. She sighed wearily as the snow began to fall faster. She knew that even with her thick pelt, she would have to go into her den if it got any worse. With her tail flicking back and forth, she entered the camp.
~ I will change my colors or desc if you would like me to; although I love pink.
Anyway either the Winter Featherwind or Winter Avatar would be great. I hope you enjoy it!
1) ~ Cherry was born in early December; just when winter had just settled in. She was the second in a litter of four. She was always a very passive pup; therefore was the runt. As she grew, she remembered the sound of the wind howling outside the den; lulling her to sleep. As soon as she could walk, she wandered a little ways out of the den and stepped on the snow she had grown so accustomed to seeing. Cherry had always been a curious, yet smart wolf. She was the smartest, yet shyest of the litter; her brother and sisters dubbed her. She had chosen to leave her pack in search of a new life. This was a dangerous and risky thing to do; but she wanted to leave and get away from them. She wasn't sure why but lately she felt as if everything had seemed wrong. She decided to leave the pack. She told her brothers and sisters her choice; they accepted it; though they themselves were going to stay. Her parents, however, had not accepted this; and tried to forced her to stay. She rebelled against them and snuck out of camp one night while everyone was sleeping. She hasn’t seen her parents since then, and sometimes regrets her choice. She traveled for months on what would seem like an endless snowy forest. After a long time the snow melted and spring took over winter. During this time, Cherry found Dapplewood. It was a sight she welcomed after such a long period of solitude. She hopes to serve her new home well; for now she is an adult.
2) ~ Cherry has always had an odd colored pelt. She is a black and pink wolf. She has a light shade of magenta smoothly transitioning behind her ears. Her throat down to her stomach had a lighter shade of pink. Above her deep sapphire colored eyes is a crest of dark magenta fur. Her tail tip is covered in a light bliss pink. She always tries to keep her fur in top condition; it makes for a better impression on others. She has normal sized paws for her size; and is slimer than most. She is considered by others an overall pretty wolf; though she is too modest to admit that she agrees.
3) ~ Cherry’s powers grew slowly and she mastered them over time. She could feel stubs of wings growing from her shoulders. She learned that she could make a small area snow. She often walked away from the other wolves to make snow even in the heat of summer to play in. This took a considerable amount of energy. However, when she grew tired of the blistering sun and scorched ground of summer, she made snow to cool off in. Before, she could only make a trace amount appear where she was sitting. Now she can make a whole clearing have 3 inches of fresh, powdery snow. She found that she could also call up small winds. In summer when things were too hot, even in the shade, she made a breeze come to cool her off as she neared a nap.
4) ~ Cherrypelt padded along smiling to herself knowing that it was her favorite time of year again. The trees and ground were blanketed in snow; and she laughed as she sank down into the snow with a crunch. Even as she was watching the trees sway in the winter wind, it began to snow. She knew that she had best get back so she changed course, heading for the camp. She began the trek back and was jogging along briskly when she stopped short. She perked her ears; she had heard a twig snap. She strained her ears but could hear nothing more and slowly padded on; gradually getting more confident. As she neared camp, she suppressed a shiver as she looked back to see if she could spot the creature who had followed her. She saw nothing, but was still suspicious and unsatisfied. She sighed wearily as the snow began to fall faster. She knew that even with her thick pelt, she would have to go into her den if it got any worse. With her tail flicking back and forth, she entered the camp.
~ I will change my colors or desc if you would like me to; although I love pink.
Anyway either the Winter Featherwind or Winter Avatar would be great. I hope you enjoy it!
Thank you. I feel better today. I think I had an off day yesterday. Anyway I will work on my tenses, commas, and semi colons! Thanks for the input! 